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The Unknown

by Siulee
(Columbia, SC, USA)

There are some things that you hear and you see, but what I am going to tell you is nothing from this world. So get ready and hold your pants because you are going to jump.

It was a normal day. My cousin and I were walking through the woods when we felt cold air that was not normal. We lived in Puerto Rico and if that was �Cold air, I don�t think so." It got to about 55 degrees and you know that in PR it is really hot and it was in the middle of the summer. So that was weird. We started to get suspicious so we started walking slowly. My cousin said that it was a ghost but I didn�t believe her. I thought she was kidding. Just when I was going to open my mouth to tell her that it was her imagination, the wind got real heavy and blew me away. I fell down and my cousin came after me to help me up.

When I stood up I saw a car in the middle of the woods and I asked my cousin �Was��. .that�. .�..there?� My cousin turned around and said nothing like if she knew what was happening. We stared at the car for a while and then my cousin said, "�..R..R..R�RUN. What why��� look behind you!"

I turned around and saw the car turning on and looking at us we stared running. The
car was right behind us. We ran all the way to this old house. The car just backed off and I knew something had made that car back off. We were getting close to the house when I heard a scream. I stopped and looked inside the house when a head showed up in front of me. It was cut and had a bad smell like rotting eggs. When I looked at my cousin it was gone!

I got really scared. I even was shaking. I couldn�t even talk to my cousin and felt real cold. Then she started to talk but not in her normal voice. It sounded like a man's voice, but he was a real man. At first I thought she was kidding but then I saw something I never saw before. I thought my life was over. The whole sky turned black and I saw people coming from underground. They looked like zombies but they weren�t. I was getting scared because you know zombies. Ok, that's too much info. Well as I was saying I was trying to get away from these creepy people when my cousin stops and she looks at me as if she was going to do something stupid. She stopped and got a branch. She put a lot of them in the way we were going, so they could trip over the branches. Again something happened I didn't expect. They started flying - now that�s is creepy.

We ran all the way back to the house. I knocked on the door and no one answered. I knocked on the door again and after I did the second time the door opened by itself. My cousin and I went to the back door to see if someone was putting a prank on us, but there was no body behind the door. I was scared. Even my cousin saw me and said, "I want to go home." So my cousin and I try to go home but we can't find the way.

Then I heard a noise. It was my mom so I followed her voice and five minutes passed. I was there with my mom. That day my cousin stayed at my house for a night. But there is something out there that keeps calling my name and I think that it is NOT OVER YET�..

In the night I always hear sounds inside those woods and I think it will NEVER STOP UNTIL IT GETS WHAT IT WANTS���..


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The Unknown

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Dec 17, 2007
Great imagination!
by: Kandi

It is clear that you have a talent for writing.
great story line. It would make an excellent Goosebumps movie.

It is clear that you have an excellent imagination! this story would make an excellent Goosbumps after school special.

Nov 10, 2007
by: Anonymous

I'm not normally one to doubt other's experiences, because I have had some strange ones myself, but this one just seems TOO far-fetched. I believed it up to the point of the car, but the "zombies" were too much..

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