This story has potential, had Paul not made it so choppy. It was as if I was reading his cryptic notes from his interview with Gen, until he tells of himself. Then it gets elaborate with too many details. Who is the story about, Gen or Paul? And I do believe it is a sarcophagus, not a sarphogus.
Mar 12, 2008 Rating
Great Story Presentation by: Anonymous
A great writing job and just the kind of story we want to read.
